In love with the song Chasing Cars, By Snow Patrol. Got my depressing sonnet back in english. It was just for a completion mark.... :(. Ill write it out for y'all.
If Only I could take it all back,
What I spoke to you should not have been said.
If Only you hadn't slipped through the crack.
My Life Is Different Now that you are dead.
Time after time I would watch you go.
Never did I think this would be the last.
Only this would be the time I did not show,
The love I would have shown you in the past.
It pains me, It Burns Me, to not even see.
When I wake up each morning the spark in your eyes.
The every little bit of your beauty.
Your soft little glance that could light up the skies.
I step into the void, under the moon.
Don't worry my darling, Ill see you soon.
Its not perfect but its good. Feedback please. Movie review in the next post.
Grand Cayman
2 years ago
5 comments:
It is beautiful KW. You are a born writer. I am so proud of you.
Great sonnet!
Iwonder who or what you were thinking about when you wrote it?
Clifford or some secret love?
Also, are yoou going to come to kamloops on the long weekend?
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fantastic K. I really felt it.
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